Not Everyone is Keen on the New Design

September 25th, 2007 4

Paul Lloyd and I went to school together. We laughed and cried together. We shared chips from the same paper bag. But alas, he is not keen on the new design. I don’t know if we can weather this rift in our friendship. As an attempt to repair broken prides and clear the air I would like to publicly discuss the issues my friend Mr. Lloyd has with my design.

But first, a brief history.

As already mentioned, myself and Paul went to the same fine secondary education establishment. After a teary goodbye, we both left for our respective Universities - Paul choosing a course in Graphic Design and myself a stint in Multimedia Design. After completing our eduction (both with an Atilla) we moved into jobs, greasing our way up the ranks to reach the lofty heights of Lead Design at Ning and Interaction Designer at Glaxstar.

It should be mentioned at this point that whereas I have always had slightly more technical skill than Paul, he far outstrips me on the design front. That said, lets now move onto what he thought of the new design.

F*****G Stars!

Were the first words out of Paul’s mouth. Too many stars apparently. I gathered from this that Paul was less than impressed with the new design.

He then sent me an email, a design critique if you will, kindly enclosing a re-hashed version of the design that ‘he did on the train’. This gave me a basic overview of each area of my sins:

  • Typography
  • Colour
  • Use of space
  • Use of images
  • Those stars

Ok, time to get serious. I must admit to having my pride a little battered by Paul’s redesign, but he’s an awesome designer and a great friend. I just thought this would be funny - And a chance to put both designs out there. I’ve uploaded Paul’s Homepage and About Page to Flickr. Please feel free to take a look and rip either or both versions. Again, it’s over to you!

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#1 On September 25th, 2007 at 11:02 am Si Jobling said...

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I must admit - I couldn’t see the relevance of all the stars (unless there is a hidden message about Glax*star*).

The layout is pretty good though and I like the simplicity of the design/layout.

I like the big photo on the homepage of yourself - it gives the page focus, highlighting the main topic of the website (you!)

I also prefer the logo typeface used in Paul’s design. It looks a little clearer and the letter spacing is better too.

Sorry to be picky mate - but you did ask. :)

#2 On September 25th, 2007 at 11:58 am Mark said...

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Now I try not to agree with Lloydy simply out of principle but he has got a point.

I’m afraid to say I prefer his version. The stars are too numerous and (to my eye) randomly positioned.

But hey, what do I know about graphic design, I beat computers with a mallet for a living.

#3 On September 25th, 2007 at 2:36 pm pasquale said...

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got some higher res snaps of the designs on flickr? Having trouble spying the typography choice :)

btw- just noticed a typo:

“Browse By Categoty”
= Browse By Category

#4 On September 25th, 2007 at 6:05 pm Paul said...

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Oh wow, this was slightly unexpected.

I’d like to add that if you see my tweaks, the design remains largely unchanged, because I do actually think it looks good. It just needs the sheets tucking in around the edges.

Also, I note in this post, list items are darker than other body text… was that intended? Okay, I’ll stop now!

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